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From: macpaul@ndirect.co.uk (Paul Harvey)
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Subject: Re: Poetry - opinion
Date: Thu, 24 Sep 1998 22:24:28 +0000
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Matthew Hulett <matth@bellatlantic.net> wrote:

> >So where's this poem? I can't find it. Or am I being really thick?
> 
> It is up above a few threads... here:
> 
> >My Poem:
> 
> 
> >Breaking of the dawn
> >Singing of blackbirds on my lawn.
> >Closing of the hand to eighth
> >Sunrays absorbed by my leaving faith.
> 
> >I leave to near my heightening dreams
> >To the hub of learning streams.
> >Willingly as I attempt leap
> >Grows deeper the commitment which I want to keep. 
> 
> >The hours reach the end of the light
> >I make my way home, forth to the night.
> >Through my concious a hurricane of thoughts
> >Thoughts are my ambitions I have to be taught.
> 
> >Breaking of the dusk
> >Swirling gusts blowing flowery scent of musk.
> >Ringing of the flawless hour to end the day
> >sailing the seas of the sub concious; away, away, and away.

very good.... for a poem. But... er... why was it posted here?
Now, if it was swirling around in 3D on a Yaroze, with some kind of
psychedelic music behind it... now, that would be interesting!

~mp