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From: macsuppor@a1.nl (DEnnis Brinkhuis)
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Subject: Re: Poetry - opinion
Date: Fri, 25 Sep 1998 12:09:28 +0200
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Paul Harvey <macpaul@ndirect.co.uk> wrote:

> Matthew Hulett <matth@bellatlantic.net> wrote:
> 
> > >So where's this poem? I can't find it. Or am I being really thick?
> > 
> > It is up above a few threads... here:
> > 
> > >My Poem:
> > 
> > 
> > >Breaking of the dawn
> > >Singing of blackbirds on my lawn.
> > >Closing of the hand to eighth
> > >Sunrays absorbed by my leaving faith.
> > 
> > >I leave to near my heightening dreams
> > >To the hub of learning streams.
> > >Willingly as I attempt leap
> > >Grows deeper the commitment which I want to keep. 
> > 
> > >The hours reach the end of the light
> > >I make my way home, forth to the night.
> > >Through my concious a hurricane of thoughts
> > >Thoughts are my ambitions I have to be taught.
> > 
> > >Breaking of the dusk
> > >Swirling gusts blowing flowery scent of musk.
> > >Ringing of the flawless hour to end the day
> > >sailing the seas of the sub concious; away, away, and away.
> 
> very good.... for a poem. But... er... why was it posted here?
> Now, if it was swirling around in 3D on a Yaroze, with some kind of
> psychedelic music behind it... now, that would be interesting!
> 
> ~mp

And I was thinking that they only used this much pod in Holland. 
You all are turning paranoid with the poems and stuff..

Dennis ;-)